[latex3-commits] [git/LaTeX3-latex3-latex2e] copyedits-chris: copyedit comments removed (8754bfe0)

[Frank Mittelbach]

Repository : https://github.com/latex3/latex2e
On branch  : copyedits-chris
Link       : https://github.com/latex3/latex2e/commit/8754bfe08cd6786e42ae0842bef87ef10e67fcaa

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commit 8754bfe08cd6786e42ae0842bef87ef10e67fcaa
Author: Frank Mittelbach <frank.mittelbach at latex-project.org>
Date:   Fri Oct 29 10:09:35 2021 +0200

    copyedit comments removed


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8754bfe08cd6786e42ae0842bef87ef10e67fcaa
 base/doc/ltnews34.tex | 21 ++++++---------------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/base/doc/ltnews34.tex b/base/doc/ltnews34.tex
index 43c5678f..badd25b9 100644
--- a/base/doc/ltnews34.tex
+++ b/base/doc/ltnews34.tex
@@ -156,8 +156,6 @@ precise enough and that some clarifications were needed; these
 deficiencies have now been addressed in the documentation. 
 %
 The increased usage has also revealed 
-%%  We think that "discovered" was wrong here.  
-%%  Also acceptable would be:   uncovered  
 a small number of errors that we thought
 should be corrected now, while the adoption rate is still relatively
 small; the following problems have therefore been addressed in this release.
@@ -216,13 +214,9 @@ Note that a generic hook produced in this way is always a normal hook.
 
 The initial set of generic hooks provided by the kernel had
 two patterns of names:
-%% Chris thinks this looked better before, with the line breaks.  But OK.
 ones like
 \verb|env/|\meta{name}\verb|/after|, 
 with the variable, \meta{name}, part
-%% This either needs parentheses (or commas). 
-%% Or possibly better to make it longer, as here:
-%%    with the variable part, \meta{name} in this case,
 in the middle position;
 and ones like
 \verb|file/after/|\meta{name}, with the 
@@ -366,12 +360,8 @@ been fixed so that patching now works for those commands as well.
 
 \section{New or improved commands}
 
-%FMi reorder subsections by importance
-
 \subsection{\cs{NewCommandCopy} and \cs{ShowCommand} extended}
 
-%FMi title and description was misleading. the commands have been there before but with limited functionality
-
 Since the 2020-10-01 release (see~\cite{34:ltnews32}), \LaTeX{} 
 has provided \cs{NewCommandCopy} to copy robust commands, 
 and \cs{ShowCommand} to show their definitions on the terminal.  
@@ -395,7 +385,6 @@ have a hard limit of 16 on the number of different math font groups
 (\cs{fam} or \cs{mathgroup}) that can be used in a single formula. For each symbol font
 declared (by a package or in the preamble) an extra math group is allocated, 
 and the same happens for each math alphabet, (such as \cs{mathbf})
-%FMi that
 once it
 gets used anywhere in the document. Up to now, these math
 alphabet allocations were permanent, even if they were 
@@ -678,8 +667,6 @@ no font supports the full Unicode range).
      embellishments in command declarations]
            {Replicate argument processors for all embellishments in command declarations}
 
-%  \\ \mbox{}\qquad ?  Agreed: Better without this. 
-
 There was a bug in \pkg{ltcmd} (formerly \pkg{xparse}) that caused
 commands to misbehave if they were defined with embellishments and
 argument processors.  In that case, only one (possibly void) argument
@@ -779,8 +766,12 @@ environment's mathematical content.
 
 
 \subsection{\pkg{graphicx}:\ New key, for alt text}
-A new key, \texttt{alt}, has been added to \cs{includegraphics} to support the addition of descriptive text that is important for accessibility.
-This key is unused by default; it can be deployed by extension packages and it will provide useful support for other future possibilities.
+
+A new key, \texttt{alt}, has been added to \cs{includegraphics} to
+support the addition of descriptive text that is important for
+accessibility.  This key is unused by default; it can be deployed by
+extension packages and it will provide useful support for other future
+possibilities.
 %
 \githubissue{651}