[latex3-commits] [git/LaTeX3-latex3-latex2e] copyedits-chris: ltnews34: with comments for Karl (935b8edc)

[Chris Rowley]

Repository : https://github.com/latex3/latex2e
On branch  : copyedits-chris
Link       : https://github.com/latex3/latex2e/commit/935b8edc309e0bade6006634f8099c6d2812d507

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commit 935b8edc309e0bade6006634f8099c6d2812d507
Author: Chris Rowley <car222222 at users.noreply.github.com>
Date:   Thu Oct 28 21:27:41 2021 +0700

    ltnews34: with comments for Karl


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935b8edc309e0bade6006634f8099c6d2812d507
 base/doc/ltnews34.tex | 21 ++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/base/doc/ltnews34.tex b/base/doc/ltnews34.tex
index 2e7886b0..43c5678f 100644
--- a/base/doc/ltnews34.tex
+++ b/base/doc/ltnews34.tex
@@ -156,11 +156,9 @@ precise enough and that some clarifications were needed; these
 deficiencies have now been addressed in the documentation. 
 %
 The increased usage has also revealed 
-%%CCC discovered is simply wrong! inanimate thimgs cannot perform
-%%     thoughtful acts such as discovery! 
-%%    "uncovered" would be OK too.
-a small number of 
-errors that we thought
+%%  We think that "discovered" was wrong here.  
+%%  Also acceptable would be:   uncovered  
+a small number of errors that we thought
 should be corrected now, while the adoption rate is still relatively
 small; the following problems have therefore been addressed in this release.
 
@@ -218,13 +216,14 @@ Note that a generic hook produced in this way is always a normal hook.
 
 The initial set of generic hooks provided by the kernel had
 two patterns of names:
-%% CCC Not sure about this, I think it looked better before.  But OK.
+%% Chris thinks this looked better before, with the line breaks.  But OK.
 ones like
 \verb|env/|\meta{name}\verb|/after|, 
-with the variable 
-%% CCC this either needs parentheses (or commas) or leave it out.
-%%   \meta{name}
-part in the middle position;
+with the variable, \meta{name}, part
+%% This either needs parentheses (or commas). 
+%% Or possibly better to make it longer, as here:
+%%    with the variable part, \meta{name} in this case,
+in the middle position;
 and ones like
 \verb|file/after/|\meta{name}, with the 
 variable part in the third
@@ -679,7 +678,7 @@ no font supports the full Unicode range).
      embellishments in command declarations]
            {Replicate argument processors for all embellishments in command declarations}
 
-%  \\ \mbox{}\qquad ?  CCC Agreed: Better wothout this. 
+%  \\ \mbox{}\qquad ?  Agreed: Better without this. 
 
 There was a bug in \pkg{ltcmd} (formerly \pkg{xparse}) that caused
 commands to misbehave if they were defined with embellishments and