[latex3-commits] [git/LaTeX3-latex3-latex2e] newlabel: reword new lablel item (411c3c10)

[David Carlisle]

Repository : https://github.com/latex3/latex2e
On branch  : newlabel
Link       : https://github.com/latex3/latex2e/commit/411c3c104ce002a1e73e0eea1bf5b51fa2326cc4

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commit 411c3c104ce002a1e73e0eea1bf5b51fa2326cc4
Author: David Carlisle <d.p.carlisle at gmail.com>
Date:   Sun Dec 4 16:56:31 2022 +0000

    reword new lablel item


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411c3c104ce002a1e73e0eea1bf5b51fa2326cc4
 base/doc/ltnews37.tex | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/base/doc/ltnews37.tex b/base/doc/ltnews37.tex
index 1098c6f4..8398e9b2 100644
--- a/base/doc/ltnews37.tex
+++ b/base/doc/ltnews37.tex
@@ -151,20 +151,20 @@
 
 \subsection{Extension of the \cs{label} command}
 
-Up to now the \cs{label} command stored in standard \LaTeX{} into the
-\cs{newlabel} command in the \texttt{.aux} file two data: 
+Prevously, in standard \LaTeX{}, the \cs{label} command stored  into the
+\cs{newlabel} command in the \texttt{.aux} file two values: 
 \cs{@currentlabel}, which normally contains the state of the current 
 counter, and \cs{thepage} for the current page number.  \pkg{hyperref} and 
-\pkg{nameref} patch the \cs{label} command to store five data: 
+\pkg{nameref} patched the \cs{label} command to store five values: 
 Additionally they save \cs{@currentlabelname}, which normally contains the 
 current title text and can be retrieved with \cs{nameref} and 
 \cs{@currentHref} which is the name of the destination needed to create an 
-active link. The fifth data container is currently only used if external 
-references are loaded with the \pkg{xr-hyper} package. 
+active link. The fifth argument was only used if external 
+references were loaded with the \pkg{xr-hyper} package. 
 
-Starting with this release the number of arguments have be unified. 
+Starting with this release, the number of arguments have been unified. 
 \cs{label} now writes a
-\cs{newlabel} command containing five data: \cs{@currentlabel},
+\cs{newlabel} command containing five values: \cs{@currentlabel},
 \cs{thepage}, \cs{@currentlabelname}, \cs{@currentHref}. The fifth 
 container is reserved for the kernel and contains data needed for the 
 tagged PDF project.