[latex3-commits] [git/LaTeX3-latex3-latex2e] copyedits-chris: ltnews34: last minute edits (eab6f6ac)

[Chris Rowley]

Repository : https://github.com/latex3/latex2e
On branch  : copyedits-chris
Link       : https://github.com/latex3/latex2e/commit/eab6f6ac2a80c133fcb34e0acfbd94e2f641e4b2

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commit eab6f6ac2a80c133fcb34e0acfbd94e2f641e4b2
Author: Chris Rowley <car222222 at users.noreply.github.com>
Date:   Thu Oct 21 19:42:24 2021 +0700

    ltnews34: last minute edits
    
    of the new item, for gh697 plus a tweak


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eab6f6ac2a80c133fcb34e0acfbd94e2f641e4b2
 base/doc/ltnews34.tex | 18 ++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/base/doc/ltnews34.tex b/base/doc/ltnews34.tex
index 1ee8fdfa..7b091ecd 100644
--- a/base/doc/ltnews34.tex
+++ b/base/doc/ltnews34.tex
@@ -213,7 +213,7 @@ after which all German words would be colored blue in the text.
 
 Note that a generic hook produced in this way is always a normal hook.
 
-\subsection{Standardizing the names of generic hooks}
+\subsection{Standardized names for the generic hooks}
 
 The initial set of generic hooks provided by the kernel had
 two patterns of names:\\
@@ -314,7 +314,6 @@ its code being removed after use to free up some memory.
 \githubissue{565}
 
 
-
 \subsection{\cs{RemoveFromHook} with a missing code label}
 
 In the first version of \cs{RemoveFromHook}, when the code label
@@ -346,21 +345,20 @@ and it is also truly independent of package loading order.
 %
 \githubissue{625}
 
+\subsection{Patching commands that contain parameter tokens}
 
-\subsection{Fix patching of commands that contain parameter tokens}
-
-In the previous release, \LaTeX's hook mechanism was extended to add
+In the last release, \LaTeX's hook mechanism was extended to add
 support for hooking into commands using generic \hook{cmd} hooks
-(see~\cite{34:ltnews33}).  The initial version had a bug, in which the
-patching of some commands with a parameter token (normally \verb|#|) in
-their definition would fail with a low-level \TeX{} error.  The bug has
-been fixed, and now patching works for those commands as well.
+(see~\cite{34:ltnews33}).  That version of the extension had a bug: the
+patching of some commands that contained a parameter token
+(normally \verb|#|) in
+their definition would fail with a low-level \TeX{} error.  This has now
+been fixed so that patching now works for those commands as well.
 %
 \githubissue{697}
 
 
 
-
 \section{New or improved commands}