[latex3-commits] [git/LaTeX3-latex3-latex2e] copyedits-chris: ltnews34: more tweaks and tidying (23590227)

[Chris Rowley]

Repository : https://github.com/latex3/latex2e
On branch  : copyedits-chris
Link       : https://github.com/latex3/latex2e/commit/23590227109d5f8d69a8003460e918ab5af1c784

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commit 23590227109d5f8d69a8003460e918ab5af1c784
Author: Chris Rowley <car222222 at users.noreply.github.com>
Date:   Thu Oct 21 10:04:12 2021 +0700

    ltnews34: more tweaks and tidying
    
    Still no Intro
    Still contains Chris' local fixes in preamble


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23590227109d5f8d69a8003460e918ab5af1c784
 base/doc/ltnews34.tex | 25 ++++++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/base/doc/ltnews34.tex b/base/doc/ltnews34.tex
index f94ca32b..d6c5f28a 100644
--- a/base/doc/ltnews34.tex
+++ b/base/doc/ltnews34.tex
@@ -137,12 +137,13 @@
 
 \section{Introduction}
 
-\emph{Not yet written}
-
-\subsection{???}
-
-\emph{write} ?? 
+\emph{TO BE COMPOSED, PROBABLY}
 
+%%
+%  \subsection{???}
+%
+%  \emph{write} ?? 
+%%
 
 
 
@@ -393,8 +394,6 @@ it is also useful when interpreting the tracing output of the
 \pkg{fewerfloatpages} package.
 
 
-
-
 \subsection{New argument for \cs{counterwithin/without}}
 
 The commands \cs{counterwithout} and \cs{counterwithin} each now has
@@ -553,7 +552,8 @@ of \cs{newenvironment}, except that it gives distinct errors
 concerning the existence of \cs{foo} and \cs{endfoo}.
 
 
-\subsection{Improve the error message \texttt{\cs{begin} ended by \textellipsis}}
+\subsection{Improve the error 
+     message \texttt{\textup{\cs{begin} ended by \textellipsis}}}
 
 In the past it was possible to get an error message something
 like \verb=\begin{foo} ended by \end{foo}=. This could happen when the
@@ -731,8 +731,6 @@ so that the use of \texttt{\#} here no longer generates an error.
 
 
 
-
-
 \section{Changes to packages in the \pkg{graphics} category}
 
 
@@ -794,8 +792,8 @@ If an undefined label is referenced, \pkg{varioref} makes a default
 definition so that later processing finds the right structure (two
 brace groups inside \cs{r@}\meta{label}) However, if \pkg{nameref} or
 \pkg{hyperref} is loaded this data structure changes to having five
-arguments; this could cause low-evel errors in some cases. The code has therefore now
-been changed to avoid these errors.
+arguments; this could cause low-evel errors in some cases. 
+The code has therefore now been changed to avoid these errors.
 %
 \sxissue{603948}
 
@@ -807,7 +805,8 @@ This change in amsmath fixes a spacing problem caused by the
 method used in \pkg{hyperref} to change the \env{equation} environment.
 %
 For simplicity, an explicit, low-level (hence possibly temporary) 
-patch has been added to \pkg{amsmath}: this consists of an extra, empty (hence invisible)
+patch has been added to \pkg{amsmath}: this consists 
+of an extra, empty (hence invisible)
 \cs{mathopen} atom (with no mathematical meaning) at the start of the 
 environment's mathematical content.
 %