[latex3-commits] [git/LaTeX3-latex3-latex2e] copyedits-chris: ltnews34: more tweaks (62da9fb6)

[Chris Rowley]

Repository : https://github.com/latex3/latex2e
On branch  : copyedits-chris
Link       : https://github.com/latex3/latex2e/commit/62da9fb6241b6cec2ef6726b0ec45f1cb9c0ba8c

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commit 62da9fb6241b6cec2ef6726b0ec45f1cb9c0ba8c
Author: Chris Rowley <car222222 at users.noreply.github.com>
Date:   Sun Oct 3 11:54:52 2021 +0700

    ltnews34: more tweaks


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62da9fb6241b6cec2ef6726b0ec45f1cb9c0ba8c
 base/doc/ltnews34.tex | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/base/doc/ltnews34.tex b/base/doc/ltnews34.tex
index b34d6895..fac21130 100644
--- a/base/doc/ltnews34.tex
+++ b/base/doc/ltnews34.tex
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
 
 %% NOTE:  Chris' preferred hyphens!
 %%\showhyphens{parameters}
-\hyphenation{because parameters parameter}
+%%  \hyphenation{because parameters parameter}
 
 \usepackage[T1]{fontenc}
 
@@ -630,7 +630,7 @@ time \cs{bfseries} or \cs{mdseries} was executed.
 
 However, the problem with that
 approach was that any call to \cs{DeclareFontSeriesDefault} that
-happened in the mean time was overwritten---thus the two approaches didn't
+happened in the mean time was overwritten, thus these two approaches didn't
 work well side by side.  This is a problem because older font packages
 use the legacy method while newer ones use
 \cs{DeclareFontSeriesDefault}. This has now been corrected by changing