[latex3-commits] [git/LaTeX3-latex3-latex2e] develop: docu corrections suggested by Chris (563fec2b)

[Frank Mittelbach]

Repository : https://github.com/latex3/latex2e
On branch  : develop
Link       : https://github.com/latex3/latex2e/commit/563fec2ba46247e9254f6c3a67d13dd08d02c001

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commit 563fec2ba46247e9254f6c3a67d13dd08d02c001
Author: Frank Mittelbach <frank.mittelbach at latex-project.org>
Date:   Tue Nov 3 17:56:06 2020 +0100

    docu corrections suggested by Chris


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563fec2ba46247e9254f6c3a67d13dd08d02c001
 base/ltshipout.dtx | 18 ++++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/base/ltshipout.dtx b/base/ltshipout.dtx
index 97aa3d7b..08d2da5f 100644
--- a/base/ltshipout.dtx
+++ b/base/ltshipout.dtx
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
 %
 %    \begin{macrocode}
 \providecommand\ltshipoutversion{v1.0c}
-\providecommand\ltshipoutdate{2020/10/28}
+\providecommand\ltshipoutdate{2020/11/03}
 %    \end{macrocode}
 %
 %<*driver>
@@ -193,7 +193,8 @@
 %    \item[\hook{shipout/lastpage}]
 %
 %       The corresponding hook to add \cs{special}s at the very end of
-%       the output file. It is only executed on the very last page ---
+%       the output file. It is only executed on the very last page of
+%       the output file ---
 %       or rather on the page that \LaTeX{} believes is the last one.
 %
 %       It may not be possible for \LaTeX{} to correctly determine
@@ -681,7 +682,8 @@
 %    \cs{shipout}.
 %
 %     We increment it after running the above hook so that the values
-%    for \cs{g_shipout_totalpages_int} and \cs{} are in sync while the
+%    for \cs{g_shipout_totalpages_int} and \cs{g_shipout_readonly_int}
+%    are in sync while the
 %    hook is executed (in the case that totalpages isn't manually
 %    altered or through discarding pages that is).
 %    \begin{macrocode}
@@ -1138,7 +1140,7 @@
 %    \begin{macrocode}
 \cs_new:Npn \@@_picture_overlay:n #1 {
 %    \end{macrocode}
-%    The very first time this is executed we have to initializes (and
+%    The very first time this is executed we have to initialize (and
 %    freeze) the origins.
 %    \begin{macrocode}
     \@@_init_page_origins:
@@ -1257,7 +1259,7 @@
 %    or the statement is missing from it we initialize it with the
 %    largest possible number in \TeX{}. We use this as the default
 %    because then we are inserting the \hook{shipout/lastpage} on
-%    the last page (or after the last page but not on page 1 for a
+%    the last page (or after the last page) but not on page 1 for a
 %    multipage document.
 %    \begin{macrocode}
 \xdef\@abspage at last{\number\maxdimen}
@@ -1269,11 +1271,11 @@
 %
 %    Instead of using the hooks \hook{enddocument} and
 %    \hook{enddocument/afterlastpage} we add this code to private
-%    kernel hooks to be 100\% when it is executed and to avoid
+%    kernel hooks to be 100\% sure when it is executed and to avoid
 %    cluttering the hooks with data that is always there.
 %
 %    Inside \cs{enddocument} there is a \cs{clearpage}. Just before
-%    that we execute this code here. There is a good change that we
+%    that we execute this code here. There is a good chance that we
 %    are on the last page. Therefore, if we don't know the value from
 %    the last run, we assume that the current page is the right
 %    one. So we set \cs{@abspage at last} and as a result the next
@@ -1357,7 +1359,7 @@
 %    At this point we also signal to \LaTeX{}'s endgame that a rerun is
 %    necessary so that an appropriate message can be shown on the
 %    terminal. We do this by simply defining a command used as a flag and
-%    tested \cs{enddocument}.
+%    tested in \cs{enddocument}.
 %    \begin{macrocode}
               \cs_gset_eq:NN \@extra at page@added \relax
             }