[texworks] Call for Help: Proofreading the manual
David J. Perry
hospes.primus at verizon.net
Fri Mar 4 04:58:41 CET 2011
Hi Stefan,
Thanks for all your work on the manual; it will be very helpful for users.
A quick read gives the following.
David
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page 4: "font creator" should read "font creators"
Ch. 2: MiKTeX now includes TeXworks; in fact, it is the default editor if I
understand correctly. So there is no need to download separately. This
version of TeXworks is customized by the MiKTeX folks, I think -- e.g., the
printing feature is enabled. Perhaps a footnote explaining this? IIRC,
MacTeX now also provides TeXworks.
3.2.1: Perhaps a little more should be said about fonts. Those new to
(La)TeX will be accustomed to using all their system fonts. I suggest a
statement that only fonts that come pre-installed with the TeX distribution
can be used (if that's the correct way to phrase it; and how are new users
supposed to know which fonts those are?) plus a pointer to a more detailed
discussion of fonts in LaTeX.
page 19, next to last line: "code which represent" should read "represents";
periods missing after three footnotes.
In general, I think 4.4.2 needs a little work. Beginners will have no idea
what codes can be used; how is one to know that, e.g., \n replaces a
carriage return? (Maybe programmers all know this stuff and I don't; if so,
my apologies -- but TeXworks is not only for programmers!) Having a
footnote that says the information is on the internet is not helpful; I
suggest giving at least one reference or a suggestion of what to google for.
[ADDENDUM: after writing this, I now see that Appendix has this information,
so all we need here is a cross-reference to it.] The title also may be too
technical. I totally ignored this when I first read the manual, thinking it
was only for programmers. When I reread it just now, I realized that this
is something I do all the time in Word with search and replace. Could it be
called something like "search and replace formatting characters"?
4.5.1: the standard Windows redo shortcut, Ctrl-Y, works also; I don't think
any Windows user normally uses Ctrl-Alt-Z.
4.5.4: . . . two types of quotation marks [no comma] in English: [colon not
comma] . The curly quote at the end of the sentence should be replaced by
a straight single quote, otherwise the whole point of the discussion is
lost.
page 32: In English, the normal name for additional sections of text placed
at the end of a document is "Appendices" not "Annexes."
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