[latex3-commits] [latex3/latex2e] develop: minor editorial updates to ltnews37 by bb (dd3e572e)

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Repository : https://github.com/latex3/latex2e
On branch  : develop
Link       : https://github.com/latex3/latex2e/commit/dd3e572eed7d5b15772203c404b4e50652a40028

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commit dd3e572eed7d5b15772203c404b4e50652a40028
Author: Frank Mittelbach <frank.mittelbach at latex-project.org>
Date:   Fri May 26 11:24:35 2023 +0200

    minor editorial updates to ltnews37 by bb


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dd3e572eed7d5b15772203c404b4e50652a40028
 base/doc/ltnews37.tex | 30 ++++++++++++++++--------------
 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/base/doc/ltnews37.tex b/base/doc/ltnews37.tex
index 5b2a55dd..9cbf7f29 100644
--- a/base/doc/ltnews37.tex
+++ b/base/doc/ltnews37.tex
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ but some of them will be delayed until after the June release.
 A prototype for math tagging (including support for the \pkg{amsmath}
 environments) is already available, but it is mainly intended for
 experimentation and feedback and the resulting tagging is by no means
-the way we envision it to be eventually. If you like to try it out use
+the way we envision it to be eventually. If you would like to try it out use
 the following line:
 \begin{verbatim}
 \DocumentMetadata{testphase={phase-III,math}}
@@ -187,8 +187,8 @@ Note that the math tagging code at this point in time will clash with
 packages that redefine the \texttt{\$} (which then may lead to strange
 errors) and that packages that use math mode for non-mathematical
 constructs may result in surprising output as far as tagging is
-concerned. Feedback on which packages fail with the code in one or the
-other way would be appreciated.
+concerned. Feedback on which packages fail with the code in one or
+another way would be appreciated.
 
 The \texttt{latex-lab} bundle contains various 
 (still untagged) documentation files about the new code that can
@@ -250,14 +250,14 @@ mistakenly reference the newly added arguments.
 The commands \cs{NewReversedHookWithArguments}, \cs
 {NewMirroredHookPairWithArguments}, \cs
 {AddToHookNextWithArguments}, \cs{UseOneTimeHookWithArguments}, and
-the \pkg{expl3} conterparts of the commands discussed in this section
+the \pkg{expl3} counterparts of the commands discussed in this section
 were also added.  The complete documentation can be found in the
 \pkg{lthooks} documentation \cite{37:lthooks-doc}.
 
 \subsubsection{Generic \texttt{cmd} hooks with arguments}
 
 Along with the possibility to pass arguments to a regular hook as
-discussed above, generic \hook{cmd} hooks now can access the arguments
+discussed above, generic \hook{cmd} hooks can now access the arguments
 of the command they are patched into using the interface described in
 the previous section.
 
@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ not use grouping.
 
 Previously, in standard \LaTeX{}, the \cs{label} command wrote a \cs{newlabel} declaration into
 the \texttt{.aux} file and stored two values in
-second argument of this \cs{newlabel} command:
+the second argument of this \cs{newlabel} command:
 \cs{@currentlabel}, which normally contains the state of the current 
 counter and \cs{thepage} for the current page number.
 
@@ -396,7 +396,7 @@ current title text and can be retrieved with \cs{nameref}, and
 active link. The fifth argument was only used if external 
 references were loaded with the \pkg{xr-hyper} package. 
 
-Starting with this release, the number of values stored in \cs{newlabel} have been unified. 
+Starting with this release, the number of values stored in \cs{newlabel} has been unified. 
 \cs{label} now writes a
 \cs{newlabel} command that always contains five values in the second argument (each in a brace group):
 \cs{@currentlabel}, \cs{thepage}, \cs{@currentlabelname}, 
@@ -549,7 +549,7 @@ it is open and ready to receive material.
 
 The \pkg{unicode-math} package alters the catcode of \verb=|= but does
 not adjust its value for use in \pkg{doc}, with the result that
-\enquote{or} module, i.e., $\langle A | B \rangle$ are displayed in a
+\enquote{or} modules, i.e., $\langle A | B \rangle$ are displayed in a
 strange way. This is now fixed with some firstaid code that will
 eventually be moved into \pkg{unicode-math}.
 %
@@ -594,7 +594,7 @@ drops spaces, hence the difference.
 
 With the new paragraph handling introduced in 2021 it is now finally
 possible to detect and avoid this problem and apply appropriate
-counter measures so that from now on the spacing will be always
+counter measures so that from now on the spacing will always be
 correct.
 %
 \githubissue{989}
@@ -656,7 +656,7 @@ to add \cs{ignorespaces} after the math group.
 When \LaTeXe{} was released, the team provided documentation for both document
 authors and package/class developers in the two files \texttt{usrguide} and
 \texttt{clsguide}. Over time, the team have augmented these documents as new
-methods have been added to the kernel. However, they retained there structure
+methods have been added to the kernel. However, they retained their structure
 as starting from familiarity with \LaTeX{}~2.09. This meant that for new users,
 there was material which is no longer relevant, and less clarity than desirable
 in what approaches are recommended today.
@@ -671,7 +671,7 @@ user guide, but both are worth a re-read by experienced \LaTeX{} users.
 \subsection{Displaying the exact release dates for \LaTeX{}}
 
 In some situations it is necessary to find out the exact release dates
-for older version of the \LaTeX{} format, for example, when you need
+for older versions of the \LaTeX{} format, for example, when you need
 to use different code in a package depending on the availability of a
 certain feature and you therefore want to use
 \cs{IfFormatAtLeastTF}\texttt\{\meta{date}\texttt\} or the
@@ -686,7 +686,7 @@ format before a certain \meta{date}, in which case you could use
 
 The big problem is to know the exact \meta{date} to put into such
 commands and in the past that was not that easy to find. You could have 
-looked in the the file \file{changes.txt}, but that is hidden somewhere
+looked in the file \file{changes.txt}, but that is hidden somewhere
 in your installation and if you try
 \verb*/texdoc -l changes.txt/ you get more than thirty results and the %*
 right file is by no means the first.
@@ -722,7 +722,7 @@ that it will provide our readers with all the information they need to
 successfully navigate the \LaTeX{} ecosystem and efficiently produce
 beautiful documents.
 
-Since the publication of the last edition (2004) a lot has happened in
+Since the publication of the last edition (2004), a lot has happened in
 the \LaTeX{} world and thus a complete rewrite was necessary.  All
 chapters have been thoroughly revised and in many cases largely
 extended to describe new important functionality and features. More
@@ -744,10 +744,12 @@ find some excerpts at
 \end{quote}
 
 The edition is also available as an eBook (Parts I and II combined)
-consisting of PDF and ePub format without DRM. Finally, the publisher
+consisting of PDF and ePub format without DRM\@. Finally, the publisher
 offers the combination of the printed books and the digital versions at
 a very attractive price not available anywhere else.
 
+%% bb -- add reference to TUGboat review here
+
 
 %\section{Changes to packages in the \pkg{amsmath} category}