[latex3-commits] [git/LaTeX3-latex3-iftex] master: Proof read by Barbara (a475b29)

[David Carlisle]

Repository : https://github.com/latex3/iftex
On branch  : master
Link       : https://github.com/latex3/iftex/commit/a475b298fa2b400b9171add54152df0a05474fbd

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commit a475b298fa2b400b9171add54152df0a05474fbd
Author: David Carlisle <d.p.carlisle at gmail.com>
Date:   Sat Oct 26 23:28:24 2019 +0100

    Proof read by Barbara


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a475b298fa2b400b9171add54152df0a05474fbd
 iftex.tex | 30 +++++++++++++++---------------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/iftex.tex b/iftex.tex
index f9802db..122823e 100644
--- a/iftex.tex
+++ b/iftex.tex
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
 
 \section{Introduction}
 This original \textsf{iftex} was written as part of the \textsf{bidi}
-collection (by Persian TeX Group / Vafa Khalighi) 
+collection (by the Persian TeX Group / Vafa Khalighi) 
 and provided checks for whether a document was being
 processed with PDF\TeX, or Xe\TeX, or Lua\TeX. This version recodes
 the package and incorporates similar tests from the \textsf{ifetex}
@@ -46,26 +46,26 @@ lowercase name \verb|\iffootex| and a mixed case name \verb|\ifooTeX|.
   different engine is detected.
 \end{itemize}
 
-\section{Loading The Package}
-The package can be loaded in the usual way both in Plain \TeX\ and \LaTeX.
-\subsection{Loading The Package in Plain \TeX}
+\section{Loading the package}
+The package can be loaded in the usual way in both Plain \TeX\ and \LaTeX.
+\subsection{Loading the package in plain \TeX}
 \begin{verbatim}
 \input iftex.sty
 \end{verbatim}
 
-\subsection{Loading The Package in \LaTeX}
+\subsection{Loading the package in \LaTeX}
 \begin{verbatim}
 \usepackage{iftex}
 \end{verbatim}
 
-\subsection{Loading The Package in ini\TeX}
-The package assumes very little existing macros and may be loaded
+\subsection{Loading the package in ini\TeX}
+The package assumes very few existing macros and may be loaded
 during format setup in a format without the plain \TeX\ or \LaTeX\
 format being loaded. From an initial ini\TeX\ setup the package may
 be loaded as for plain \TeX.
 
-\section{Engine Test Conditionals}
-All the conditionals defined here are used in the same way
+\section{Engine test conditionals}
+All the conditionals defined here are used in the same way:
 \begin{verbatim}
 \ifluatex
   luatex specific code
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ True if an e\TeX\ enabled format is in use. (This is necessarily true
 in all \LaTeX\ variants.)
 \item[\cs{ifpdftex},    \cs{ifPDFTeX}]
 True if PDF\TeX\ is in use (whether writing PDF or DVI), so this is
-true for documents processed with the both \textsf{latex} and
+true for documents processed with both the  \textsf{latex} and
 \textsf{pdflatex} commands.
 \item[\cs{ifxetex},     \cs{ifXeTeX}]
 True if Xe\TeX\ is in use.
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ true for Lua\TeX\ and Xe\TeX, allowing constructs such as
 
 \section{Requiring specific engines}
 For each supported engine, the package provides a command
-\verb|\Require...| which checks that the document id being processed
+\verb|\Require...| which checks that the document is being processed
 with a suitable engine, and stops with an error message if not.
 
 \begin{description}
@@ -142,9 +142,9 @@ with a suitable engine, and stops with an error message if not.
 \end{description}
 
 
-\section{Output Mode Conditional}
+\section{Output mode conditional}
 This package also provides an \verb|\ifpdf| conditional that is true
-if the format is set up to output in PDF mode rather than DVI. this is
+if the format is set up to output in PDF mode rather than DVI. This is
 equivalent to the test in the existing \textsf{ifpdf} package.
 
 Unlike the engine tests above this is defined as if by \verb|\newif|
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ if the output mode is reset (for example by setting
 Unlike the original \textsf{ifpdf} package, the version here also
 detects PDF output mode if running in V\TeX.
 
-\section{Additional Packages}
+\section{Additional packages}
 This extended \textsf{iftex} is designed to replace the original
 \textsf{iftex} and also the packages 
 \textsf{ifetex}, \textsf{ifluatex}, \textsf{ifvtex}, \textsf{ifxetex}.
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ directly.
 
 Note that while this package provides basic support for detecting
 p\TeX\ (Japanese \TeX) variants and is broadly compatible with the
-\textsf{ifptex} package, the \textsf{ifptex} has many more detailed
+\textsf{ifptex} package, the \textsf{ifptex} package has many more detailed
 tests for p\TeX\ variants and this package does \emph{not} replace the
 \textsf{ifptex} (or \textsf{ifxptex}) packages, which are maintained
 by their original authors and recommended for Japanese documents that