[latex3-commits] [l3svn] r7332 - Typos/grammar [ci skip]

[Chris Rowley]

Bruno

> 
> The texnote just below this is mostly redundant and states no box is 
> used, which may look contradictory with the insertion of a box of width 
> parindent.  I couldn't think of a better phrasing.
> 

True, I had wondered about how ‘no box involved’ might be interpreted.

Maybe change to:  no unboxing is involved .

Since I did not understand the meaning or significance of ‘after … is complete’, 
I did not comment on it:

    This results in the contents of the \tn{everypar} token register being inserted, 
    after \cs{mode_leave_vertical:} is complete.

Maybe it should now read:

     Thus the contents of the . . . are inserted at the end of the expansion of . . . .

But maybe I have misunderstood.

BTW: what is a ‘texnote'  ??

Thanks,
Chris


> 
> 
> Modified: trunk/l3kernel/l3candidates.dtx
> ===================================================================
> --- trunk/l3kernel/l3candidates.dtx	2017-07-05 04:59:49 UTC (rev 7331)
> +++ trunk/l3kernel/l3candidates.dtx	2017-07-05 11:28:57 UTC (rev 7332)
> @@ -89,9 +89,9 @@
> %     \cs{mode_leave_vertical:}
> %   \end{syntax}
> %   Ensures that \TeX{} is not in vertical (inter-paragraph) mode. In
> -%   a horizontal mode this command has no effect, in vertical mode it
> -%   switches to horizontal mode, inserts inserting a box of width
> -%   \\tn{parindent}, which then inserts the \tn{everypar} token list.
> +%   horizontal or math mode this command has no effect, in vertical mode it
> +%   switches to horizontal mode, and inserts a box of width
> +%   \tn{parindent}, followed by the \tn{everypar} token list.
> %   \begin{texnote}
> %     This results in the contents of the \tn{everypar} token register being
> %     inserted, after \cs{mode_leave_vertical:} is complete. Notice that in
>